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4th of July

Fri Jul 4, 2008 10:55 PM EDT
us-news, poetry, independence, fireworks, 4th-of-july-america
By Celestina

Photo by Dan Zen. (License: Creative Commons Attribution)

Boom. Happy 4th, everyone.

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4th of July

On the fourth of July the air smells of sulphur
and i walk outside for a moment, surprised in spite
of myself to find that i want to hope
my son says that the sounds are like gunfire
that the air is full of violence
that the holiday is based on violence
and i don't know what to say i say
yeah, but the colours are pretty and
he serves the scorn i know i have coming.

i always want the fireworks to be more to be
a thing from my fantasy a thing
brilliant with passion and belief and more
that someone, somewhere thought was worth making
into a scene across the sky. but
i watch the garish lights and i watch the rapt faces and
i feel cold, as always, watching
all the other faces that want to believe.

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Celestina

I don't do poetry, as a rule.

  • 9 votes
Reply#1 - Fri Jul 4, 2008 10:56 PM EDT
vas

I'm glad you like to break rules.

  • 5 votes
#1.1 - Mon Jul 7, 2008 2:33 PM EDT
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Djehuty

Write to Obama and tell him to start listening to the people with big hearts and stop listening to the safe grey people with small minds. Then maybe he can think about a country worth believing in, again.

Sorry - I guess that's stealing from your mood, but it's been in my head these last few days. @!$%#ing politicians :(

I do like the poem, and especially your son's anger. That sort is the good sort!

  • 12 votes
Reply#2 - Fri Jul 4, 2008 11:59 PM EDT
Celestina

Thanks, you. Yeah, I have been very irritated with Obama, as of late. He seems to be missing the point that those that were willing to donate $20 a month are not so willing if he plays the middle.
My son...well, he gets all too well what is going down and how it will apply to him when he can vote. He's a constant reminder that "doing all I can" is never quite doing enough.
And as for the mood, here...there's a lot of people watching fireworks tonight. I can only hope they meant something to them, enough that they want to fight for something better tomorrow.

  • 10 votes
#2.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:07 AM EDT
Sem0l1na

Wow, that IS optimistic!

Driving around on the evening of the fourth is a drunken mad scene of pretty short-tempered folks in my town...they do not seem to have the slightest perspective past the bridges of their noses, based on how they are driving.

I took my kids up to the top of a hill and watched from a field at the top. Thankfully, just a few neighborhood folks know about this spot. Even here, the revelers are edgy, yelling breaks out every so often ("I said shut the f*#$k up!!") and the crowd seems unaware of the slightest symbolism.

Then again, no one is propping the imagination along up on the hill, with patriotic music, and so on, so the good people can all put their hands on their hearts and shed a tear. Fight for something? My guess is that mainly they will squabble at the gas pump tomorrow. Sometimes I can barely stand my own cynicism...

The one hope for me personally, is that there are outliers. Thankfully, we will always have the outliers, with their wild-eyed visions.

  • 5 votes
#2.2 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 8:08 AM EDT
Celestina

Wow, that IS optimistic!

Well it helped a lot that I didn't go out into the crowds. It's much easier to be optimistic if you simply avoid people. ;)

Thankfully, we will always have the outliers, with their wild-eyed visions.

Yes, indeed. Throughout's humankind's history most folks have just been trying to get by and aren't interested in anything more than making sure they have the next meal on the table. It's been the small handful of folks with a little more vision (whether what we now would call "good" or "bad") that actually move things along. And those folks are always out there, even now.

  • 7 votes
#2.3 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:08 AM EDT
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Sem0l1na

Heh, heh...First time (and last time) I had an episode of complete agoraphobia/claustrophobia or some combination of the two was when my then boyfriend dragged me to watch Fourth fireworks, oh, some 19 years ago...I do like fireworks, but flag-waving crowds I can do without. It has to be the most external, superficial, meaningless display of patriotism.

19 years later, my now-father of our kids takes our son to race car shows, and they religiously sit out the star-spangled banner and pledge of allegiance. He says it's the best way to express their American freedom.

Somehow, they've so far managed to avoid being lynched by the race-car crowd...

  • 8 votes
Reply#3 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:10 AM EDT
bluecollarbytes

I know what I'd say....it's not a 'celebration of violence', but a celebration of those who went before us and what they did to hand us the best system of governance on earth.

  • 8 votes
Reply#4 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:10 AM EDT
Celestina

Well, but to some extent it's the same thing. He knows his history well, and he knows all the proud and good moments in our country's past. The hard truth, though, is that much of that goodness was bought with blood, and the "necessity" for war is a hard thing to explain to a child who wants to see peace in his lifetime.

  • 9 votes
#4.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:36 AM EDT
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azsky13

At the moment I kind of agree with your son. But I am sitting here at home just listening to the sounds of the fireworks. I don't have the benefits of the pretty colors... normally I enjoy fireworks and like to take photos of them.

But then I also have to deal with the idiots who drive over to Wisconsin to purchase the illegal fireworks. Just a lot of noise that I will continue to hear for at least the next couple of weeks.

i always want the fireworks to be more to be
a thing from my fantasy a thing
brilliant with passion and belief and more
that someone, somewhere thought was worth making
into a scene across the sky.

That is the great thing about fantasy. It can be whatever you wish it to be.

Don't lose hope...it is a precious commodity and in short supply!

  • 9 votes
Reply#5 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:18 AM EDT
Celestina

Hope is important, even if it's just based on the only constant being change. *smile* Until the fundamental laws of the universe are rewritten, I will have hope.

  • 6 votes
#5.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:21 AM EDT
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DaRrO

I hear you loud and clear. Am I wrong, or is the drving emotion pity?

  • 7 votes
Reply#6 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:31 AM EDT
Celestina

Yeah, pity mixed with a deep sadness. I mean, I love a party as much as (or more than) most people...but at this point the 4th feels more and more like my high school's pep rallies (which were mandatory, yuck). I hated my principal, hated the idiotic rules, and yet here were all these people screaming their heads off just because they happened to be chucked into that school system.

  • 7 votes
#6.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:25 AM EDT
DaRrO

twin

  • 7 votes
#6.2 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:21 PM EDT
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Redruby

My fairy tale view of the fireworks is the celebration I imagine took place when we declared our independence from the British but yes, it was certainly symbolic of war, the rocket's red glare, bombs bursting in air, gave proof through the night that our flag was still there. I imagine the flag meant something then, meant something idealistic about this new nation that meant freedom. WTF happened? Still, I always get a nostalgic feeling about that early time when I see the fireworks, imagining the sense of possibility that might have filled hearts in this new dream. Ah, I am an idealist at heart, so I need my fairy tales of promise...even thought that promise has been so corrupted.

  • 7 votes
Reply#7 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:33 AM EDT
azsky13

@ redruby ... the promise may be corrupted, but the dream is still alive. Until that is killed there is hope.

  • 9 votes
#7.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 12:37 AM EDT
Celestina

Hey, Redruby. Yep, I love my faerie tales, too, and sometimes I talk to people from other countries who want so desperately to just see America...and I think, you know, that myth is a powerful thing. That myth so many can still feel in their hearts may yet pull us out of our tailspin, just because people want it so much.
So...the 4th may leave me feeling a bit cynical, but on the 5th I am back to trying to help this country become what it could be, what we all want to believe it is.

  • 7 votes
#7.2 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:29 AM EDT
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Tamh

I like your poetry Celestina :)

The 26th January is Australia Day. I fail to see what is worth celebrating about more than 200 years of white colonisation and cultural domination, but I guess a better way of looking at it is to think ahead with hope and positivity to what I can do each day to make this a good place to live.

All the fear in people is what makes them cling to their twisted ideal of patriotism and they never once imagine that one could love their country and still be able to criticise the heart of it.

The racial and sexual vilification I have seen around here lately makes me very sad.

I think it's really pointless to celebrate what's gone before because in doing that, we blindly ignore the bad bits and glorify a country that never really was. Better to truly live the now.

  • 8 votes
Reply#8 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 2:23 AM EDT
Celestina

Thanks, Tamh.

I think it's really pointless to celebrate what's gone before because in doing that, we blindly ignore the bad bits and glorify a country that never really was. Better to truly live the now.

Yer talkin' about a revolution, there, much more fundamental than any violent action has ever been. I'd love to live to see it come to pass.

  • 6 votes
#8.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:31 AM EDT
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Orlando Dozier

"You take the blue pill, the story ends, you awake in your bed and believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in Wonderland, and I show you how deep the rabbit-hole goes. " - Morpheus

Looks like you took the red pill Celestina. Besides perhaps explaining your red-locks, after the red pill you can no longer walk numbly through the purple haze of Patriotism. I'm deep in the rabbit-hole and it's not all bad, but that red pill really drops your bullsh*t tolerance level to zero.

  • 10 votes
Reply#9 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 2:49 AM EDT
Celestina

*grin* Yeah, there's something to be said for that little warning. The more you know, the more peculiar it all becomes.
But yeah, it's not at all bad. Most of the time.

  • 9 votes
#9.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:33 AM EDT
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caroaber

I like the poem, and I like watching fireworks, provided they're far enough away from me.

  • 6 votes
Reply#10 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 9:12 AM EDT
Celestina

Thanks, caroaber.

  • 5 votes
#10.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 11:33 AM EDT
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Walt D

You ever feel like July 4th is a celebration of a check that's been in the mail for 200 years?

"Congratulations! You've won freedom, equality, brotherhood, prosperity....just as soon as we beat these British/Indians/Confederates/Mexicans/Spanish/Germans/Chinese/Russians/VietCong/Muslims..."

I prefer to look at the 4th as a celebration of an act of blatant treason....all the signers of the Declaration were British and therefore traitors to their country and not patriots at all.

  • 8 votes
Reply#11 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 1:17 PM EDT
Celestina

I prefer to look at the 4th as a celebration of an act of blatant treason....

That is a far more positive light in which to view it. I'm thinking, after my bout of moroseness last night, that we should try to reclaim the holiday. We could combine many of my Bastille Day celebration ideas with Treason Day, though admittedly the decapitated Barbie heads wouldn't be quite as appropriate, and I was fond of that part. Still...the red tinsel would work, and we could have swimming pools full of tea and we could run out in the streets with paint guns, so that's all good. Obviously, we need a year to plan this thing.

  • 9 votes
#11.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 2:41 PM EDT
Orlando Dozier

Walt looks like you doubled up on the Matrix Red Pills. :) You my friend have a gift. Not many people can make a point so Bob Dylanishly clear, kinda like a song writer, wait a minute, you are a song writer. :)

  • 9 votes
#11.2 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 4:39 PM EDT
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Cassandra

Well, I love it when you do poetry, but fireworks have always turned me off. Too much bang, too much sulfur, not enough pretty and it entirely ephemeral. I kind of agree with your kid. We had fireworks going on near me well past 1:00 pm last night, and I hated it. I hated thinking how terrified it was making the little feral kittens on my front porch. And I hated to think that most Americans are the kind of people more interested in making loud noises than thinking. But -- that's what I thought. I guess I got a red pill, too, Orlando.

  • 6 votes
Reply#12 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 1:58 PM EDT
Celestina

Well, I love it when you do poetry

Heh...but you have an admitted bias.
Come to think of it, though, I don't remember you ever taking me to fireworks as a kid. Did you? I reckon we can blame my sadly freethinking mind on you. *grin*

  • 9 votes
#12.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 2:37 PM EDT
Cassandra

Actually, I did take you a couple of times, because you really wanted to go. But I hated it, so we didn't do it much. You were born with your freethinking mind. I don't think either your father or I can take the credit. We just basked in it.

  • 9 votes
#12.2 - Sun Jul 6, 2008 1:32 PM EDT
Redruby

!!! Cassandra---Celestina!!! Mother and daughter??!!!! Awesome.

  • 6 votes
#12.3 - Wed Jul 9, 2008 9:35 PM EDT
Djehuty

Hehe Cassandra "came out" in her 8-things article :)

  • 4 votes
#12.4 - Wed Jul 9, 2008 9:55 PM EDT
Redruby

Oops...missed that.

  • 4 votes
#12.5 - Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:47 AM EDT
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Prosopon Maranatha

I took great pleasure in reading your poem.

  • 5 votes
Reply#13 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 3:58 PM EDT
Celestina

Thank you very much. I always feel sketchy with poetry, as I don't think my poetry is generally very good, so it's been nice to put one up and have it generally well received. Quite a relief, actually.

  • 4 votes
#13.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 4:09 PM EDT
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David Mc Girr

The 4th of July. Lots of flag waving, lots of yelling and all that hooplah.
We've got something similar over here. The 12th of July.
From some evidence I've seen in Northern Ireland this year,
they seem to have designed a new flag for it and everything.

Flag waving is all well and good folks, but just think,
who the hell are you waving it at?

-Dave

  • 7 votes
Reply#14 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 9:38 PM EDT
Orlando Dozier

Excellent point David. I often wonder about the answer to that question, and for the life of me, I can't come up with a logical answer. I was lucky enough to be in Germany during the last world cup and it kinda unnerved me seeing the entire country covered in German flags. And that's not an easy thing to do to me because I don't spook easy because I speak German and lived there for 7 years. I can relate to the feeling some visitors get when visiting America on the 4th of July.

  • 8 votes
#14.1 - Sat Jul 5, 2008 10:15 PM EDT
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Rob_NC

..well I had to work on Friday so I didn`t get to partake in the displays this year...but I did get to ride through rural Virgina and come to the firm conclusion American is alive and well...beautifull thing I thought ..hated to work but was most glad I did...listen and understand what I saw.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MkdhsqXzeAU

    Reply#15 - Mon Jul 7, 2008 8:05 AM EDT
    Rob_NC

    ...had to work Friday...terrible economy..yeah right...but I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the day,I had to ride through rural Virgina..and through numerous towns sang in this song ...if I can make a suggestion...road trip.....!

    • 4 votes
    Reply#16 - Mon Jul 7, 2008 8:11 AM EDT
    vicaxp

    My favorite part of the 4th was spending most of it with my kids and explaining to them why wearing red,white,and blue means nothing without understanding the why of it. Its not just a day off, thought I @!$%#ing LOVE that it is or an opportunity to get drunk (though it seems to be that as well). Its become as commercialized as any other National Holiday and that is sad...the McFourth of July!

    The fireworks dont really impress me, especially the idiots that like to shoot them off once most of us (read:my kids) are finally asleep.

    I actually did see how ingrained the fireworks, less their meaning, have become to many in society at about 950pm last night (7/6) when I heard some bangs out in front of my townhouse. I opened the front door only to see a lone redneck (not meant to offend, just illustrate) sitting on the curb in front of his house, alone, shooting off really piss-poor fireworks. Why? I thought, but now after reading the comments here, I think Orlando was right, he ate the blue pill.

    • 7 votes
    Reply#17 - Mon Jul 7, 2008 2:55 PM EDT
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